June 9

Brief introduction - 1 or 2 sentences explaining the purpose of this work (For example: the purpose of this commentary is to evaluate my work and its impact on my audience. . .)

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Write a paragraph that connects your product (your video and your performance) to the statement of inquiry (Circumstances sometimes affect the future.) and the global context (Identities and relationships).  (For example: Throughout this process I have gained an understanding that . . .)

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You can talk about how your message either reflects on the world or impacts the world and your audience.  You may innclude an image from  your performance (but this is not necessary). For example:  Throughout this process I have learned  that art can be created for a purpose and comedy can send a message . . .)

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Critically analyse your own performance.  Look at your acting, voice control, timing of your jokes, facial expressions, acting techniques used, etc. Suggest ways to improve.